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Old 11-02-2005, 09:40 PM
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In cases which there are a definite disapproval, careful signs must be given to the teen.

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In cases which there is a definite disapproval, careful signs must be given to the teen.


I am thinking the latter. Can someone explain it to me. I am a bit confused between the multiple cases...and single disapproval.

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Old 11-02-2005, 09:43 PM
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is = singular

are = plural


so yes, the second one is better.
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is is the way to go.
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So in that sentence...the is/are is refering to the disapproval and not the cases?
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referencing "A definite disapproval"
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Originally Posted by b00gers
In cases which there are a definite disapproval, careful signs must be given to the teen.

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In cases which there is a definite disapproval, careful signs must be given to the teen.


I am thinking the latter. Can someone explain it to me. I am a bit confused between the multiple cases...and single disapproval.

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It is a poorly written sentence. Wouldn't this be more clear, eliminating a compound sentence where the dependent portion has no clear subject?

Cases in which there is a definite disapproval require that careful signs are provided to the teen.
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Careful signs must be given to the teen in cases which there is a definite disapproval.
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Hmmm.


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Originally Posted by 95SiR
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Careful signs must be given to the teen in cases which there is a definite disapproval.
This is better, but needs another "in":

"Careful signs must be given to the teen in cases IN which there is a definite disapproval."

This causes 2 prepositional phrases, but is the most clear.
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Originally Posted by rabidmonk
It is a poorly written sentence. Wouldn't this be more clear, eliminating a compound sentence where the dependent portion has no clear subject?

Cases in which there is a definite disapproval require that careful signs are provided to the teen.


The wording you chose is even more awkward sounding.



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