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Old Nov 2, 2005 | 10:10 PM
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Originally Posted by rabidmonk
It is a poorly written sentence. Wouldn't this be more clear, eliminating a compound sentence where the dependent portion has no clear subject?

Cases in which there is a definite disapproval require that careful signs are provided to the teen.


The wording you chose is even more awkward sounding.
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