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Old Jun 11, 2010 | 10:33 AM
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Sounds like it is for a resume. One tip i can give is to put that in the form of bullet points. the way it is structured, it looks like it is just a mass of sentence fragments.
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Old Jun 11, 2010 | 10:37 AM
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Originally Posted by k3ifers
just tell us why you're writing this and i'm sure we'll be able to fix it.
It is for a résumé... The problem is that i wanted it to be somewhat similar to the French conterside. But it really doesn't matter I dont need this anymore. It's not for me and I realize how badly this is written so i'll just re-write it for her. My English is way better then this... trust me.

Thanks for you guys help... seriously.
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Old Jun 11, 2010 | 11:00 AM
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Old Jun 11, 2010 | 11:04 AM
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Originally Posted by Tark
It is for a résumé... The problem is that i wanted it to be somewhat similar to the French conterside. But it really doesn't matter I dont need this anymore. It's not for me and I realize how badly this is written so i'll just re-write it for her. My English is way better then this... trust me.

Thanks for you guys help... seriously.
I'm glad you didn't write that h: I was about to say, wtf tark, you're better than this!
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Old Jun 11, 2010 | 11:20 AM
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Originally Posted by Tark
ok... can you guy better this paragraphe? One day if you guys need help in french i'll be there for you


Associated technical support for the agents and treatment of escalations, bilingual, having more than 10 years of experience in the field of telecommunications/call centers. Have an excellent spirit of synthesis and a good comprehension of the operational processes allowing to solve the problems in a practical and qualified way. Motivated to find better solutions and to make decisions of quality in the presence of new projects and challenges. Stimulated by the training. Perform within a framework of work which requires a frequent coordination of the activities, an exchange of information and a team work to achieve common goals. Recognized for its skill to identify and include/understand the customer requirements. Attach a great importance to the service and the relationships to the customers.
With over 10 years of experience in telecommunications I have become an expert in conflict resolution in both French and English. Furthermore, these years of experience have taught me to make fast-paced decisions in a high pressure work environment; particularly those in a group/team which require large amounts of coordination and exchanges of information between multiple levels within a company. I have also developed my abilities in understanding complex customer requirements and I have been recognized for my outstanding efforts in customer-service.

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