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Old Oct 21, 2008 | 11:33 AM
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Originally Posted by k3ifers
takes forever to load
the lines are annoying and basic
the font is basic

the main page is flash. then it takes you to html pages. then when you go back, you aren't at the previous page, you're at the main flash part.

thesis.mov doesn't load.

just a mailto: for contact is whack.
sums it up for me.
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Old Oct 21, 2008 | 11:38 AM
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Originally Posted by Nelson
Looks like a high school computer class project

/no offense.
Good call
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Old Oct 21, 2008 | 11:59 AM
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no naked women on it = fail
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Old Oct 21, 2008 | 12:01 PM
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Originally Posted by Skelly_GSR
no naked women on it = fail
no naked men on it = double fail
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Old Oct 21, 2008 | 12:03 PM
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hehe... k...

so what im getting as not to have the site as flash... but i could embedd a flash central part in an html...

the font choice isnt the best...

takes too long to load..




i made this one for my friend in just html..


http://artofscottjonsson.com/

and this one for my dad

www.jackschweigert.com

i tried to make mine "flashier" no pun intended







i am learning as i do this.. so the feedback is definately helping

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Old Oct 21, 2008 | 12:07 PM
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i'd say that if you are going to use flash, use it for a top banner or something small that needs to be animated. main content should be text.

that second page you posted is much better than the one you created for yourself, but i mean just an outer glow with the title, two different fonts for the gallery and resume/contact and the black "curls/design" being pretty soft, hurts the page. it's not a bad layout and idea though.
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Old Oct 21, 2008 | 01:04 PM
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f the load time. i would never wait that long to see a site. got to 23% and closed. sorry can't comment on anything else
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Old Oct 21, 2008 | 03:02 PM
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You need an "s" on the end of festival in your resume
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Old Oct 24, 2008 | 11:58 PM
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alrighty.... updated it abit.. reduced the loading time 80% too..


www.schweigert-effect.com
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Old Nov 26, 2008 | 11:58 PM
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completely updated it...

how bout this style>?


everythings working but 3d gallery... im workin on a big flash file for that






one big problem... is the thing doesnt realy even friggen work in opera

but works fine in IE

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