does this sound grammatically correct?
I go duffy on dem bitches
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I actually liek this better:
Support for enterprise environment for end users and Department of Mental Heath servers including installing and troubleshooting hardware & software.
Support for enterprise environment for end users and Department of Mental Heath servers including installing and troubleshooting hardware & software.
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Holy fucking run-on sentence...:ugh:
Charlie, if that's for a list of tasks / skills / duties, break it up into at least two separate bullet points. Maybe three.
UPDATE: Assuming it's for a list, here's what I'd do:
• Hardware and software support for enterprise environment:
Charlie, if that's for a list of tasks / skills / duties, break it up into at least two separate bullet points. Maybe three.
UPDATE: Assuming it's for a list, here's what I'd do:
• Hardware and software support for enterprise environment:
° Installation and troubleshooting of new and existing hardware.
° Installation and technical support for end-user software.
° System maintenance and technical support for Department of Mental Health servers.
° Installation and technical support for end-user software.
° System maintenance and technical support for Department of Mental Health servers.
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