Thread: does this sound grammatically correct?
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Old May 17, 2007 | 02:38 PM
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Holy fucking run-on sentence...:ugh:

Charlie, if that's for a list of tasks / skills / duties, break it up into at least two separate bullet points. Maybe three.

UPDATE: Assuming it's for a list, here's what I'd do:

• Hardware and software support for enterprise environment:
° Installation and troubleshooting of new and existing hardware.

° Installation and technical support for end-user software.

° System maintenance and technical support for Department of Mental Health servers.
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