does this sentence\line sound weird?
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Originally Posted by janiVI
bah. I've been stuck on that one sentence for so long 
h:
h:" Specific Purpose: To persuade the audience that the economy benefits from media piracy."
The phrase "...To persuade the audience..." sounds a little strained to my ear.
I'd use an active voice and be specific about which economy / industry benefits from piracy.
EXAMPLE:
"Specific Purpose: Argue (or articulate) the economic benefits of media piracy within the music industry."
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From: nj
Originally Posted by TheOtherDave™
" Specific Purpose: To persuade the audience that the economy benefits from media piracy."
The phrase "...To persuade the audience..." sounds a little strained to my ear.
I'd use an active voice and be specific about which economy / industry benefits from piracy.
EXAMPLE:
"Specific Purpose: Argue (or articulate) the economic benefits of media piracy within the music industry."
would you like to write my paper :x:
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Originally Posted by RB26DETT
:bowdown:
would you like to write my paper :x:
would you like to write my paper :x:
:chuckles:
What is it?
When is it due?
How long?
How many sources?
What style [MLA, APA, Chicago]?
And lastly, how much have you got? [HINT: Call ditech.com]
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Seriously though, I'm busy as hell with finals coming round in 2 weeks time.
One piece of advice: Change sides.
I'd argue that piracy does irreparable harm.
By supporting the cause of the RIAA, you can use the whole RIAA/ Napster legal dispute as supporting evidence.
One piece of advice: Change sides.
I'd argue that piracy does irreparable harm.
By supporting the cause of the RIAA, you can use the whole RIAA/ Napster legal dispute as supporting evidence.
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From: nj
Originally Posted by TheOtherDave™
:chuckles:
What is it?
When is it due?
How long?
How many sources?
What style [MLA, APA, Chicago]?
And lastly, how much have you got? [HINT: Call ditech.com]
What is it?
When is it due?
How long?
How many sources?
What style [MLA, APA, Chicago]?
And lastly, how much have you got? [HINT: Call ditech.com]
It was due yesterday, but my lit teacher is a lazy fuck and doesnt care. I want to finish it by tomorw though.
1000 words
just the books if any at all.
MLA (never even heard of Chicago)
i've got more than enough
h:
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Originally Posted by janiVI
cool
thanks
thanks
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