Thread: English Help V.for me this time
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Old Jul 23, 2010 | 11:03 AM
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Originally Posted by lowbrow
One sentence was a lil off / hard to follow - how does this sound instead?

As a result of the way our OP is made, the lack of resources at our disposal, and the fact that we are a small number of employees; it is next to impossible to reach our revenue objectives.
"the lack of resources" IS "the fact that we are a small number of employees".

As a result of the way our OP is CALCULATED, the lack of resources at our disposal makes it next to impossible to reach our objectives.
Hows that?
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