Originally Posted by
AcuraFanatic
Your introduction is kind of weak, I'm sure your professor is going to read fifteen essays that begin that same way.
I'd try for something like "To define a social problem is to describe a condition..."
2nd paragraph is the same scenario. Instead of using "Another", try the word "Additionally, family social problems can include domestic violence."
Just suggestions, it breaks up the predicted monotony that your professor will incur, and make your paper stand out.
Otherwise looks good.
thanks man i appreciated it. this thing is due Oct 2nd. im just trying to get a copy that i can hand in and if theres time left over i want to revise it and make it that much better.
the shitty part is its only worth 40 points out off 100 and the other 60 points are the test on tuesday which consists of 125 questions.
BTW: this is the teacher who didnt know the answer about the whole where does the speed limit start> at the sign or the sight of the sign. and
PS i still couldnt find a legit answer to that question i asked a cop at best buy and he laughed and said i have to look into it. i was like WTF are you serious lol and gave him a 30% discount. BB polo is always kept in the car its my anti ticket. work 4 times so far. for tints, speeding, speeding and rolling threw a stop sign.