Ok, so I cant rember if I told you all that the chick I was going to marry and that I spent over a grand on for rings totaly shit on me when I went to see her.


Anyways. As my member names reflects. I like to write poetry. but it has to come from my heart to be good. Most the stuff I just write for fun but sounds like crap. Well. I decided to just sit and let my heart do the typing tonight and here is what I have.

What do you think?
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I Love Thee
By J. D. Y. aka Dead Poet


I love thee with all the passion of a Summers day,
with my heart beating as I'm blown away.
By the sight of thine beauty,
and the touch of your skin.
As I fall in love,
My life now begins.

I love thee as the Winter snow,
As the trees turn white.
And the wind doth blow.
My love is so pure as my heart fills with light.
My life now begins tonight.

I love thee as a Autumn fall
as the leaves turn bright
My heart knows all
I see the world inside your eyes
My life now begins to rise.

I love thee as a warm Spring night
as the moon doth glow
and the stars shine bright
I hold you in my arms and pray
that my life begins and ends this way.




*NOTE I did not write this for that chick nor do I intend on letting her read it. just kinda how my feelins in side are.*

 

u have 2 of the seasons in wrong order

 

btw...very very meaningful...i like it alot

 

This I know my friend.

Thanks

 

Thank You

 

too much with the thee's and thine... but i like it

 

Very good. Maybe I'll pass this off as my own work to my wife :rick:

Just kidding.... keep writing, you're talented.

 

nice dude, keep it up. I also like to write as well, whether it be poetry or r&b type lyrics

 

As long as you give credit where credit is due. Poetry is ment to be shared.