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Old Jul 4, 2003 | 02:40 PM
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what j00 think?

This is what happens when star-crossed lovers
won't take no for an answer.
This is what happens when two lost souls
come together as one.
This is what happens when the one thing you've longed for
finally happens to you.
This is what happened:
You fell for me,
and I fell for You.

So it goes, the same old story,
but with a different twist.
So it goes, the time without you.
I feel so dead when you're not around.
So it goes, the melancholy lover,
so lonely, so blue.
So it went:
You fell for me,
and I fell for You.
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Old Jul 4, 2003 | 02:40 PM
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Yup thats sappy
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Old Jul 4, 2003 | 02:51 PM
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very. h:
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Old Jul 4, 2003 | 03:15 PM
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sappy
more rhymes
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Old Jul 4, 2003 | 04:17 PM
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I don't like rhyming too much.

I'm more about rhythm, emphasis and meaning. Rhyming can delute the point.
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Old Jul 4, 2003 | 04:28 PM
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auuuwwwwwwwwww







who's the lucky girl?
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Old Jul 4, 2003 | 04:37 PM
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Originally posted by 99civic_love
auuuwwwwwwwwww

who's the lucky girl?
presumptious, arn't we?

eh, it was written in present tense, but it happend in the past
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Old Jul 4, 2003 | 04:47 PM
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Originally posted by 18secFerio
presumptious, arn't we?

eh, it was written in present tense, but it happend in the past
ohhhh

i didn't really read it, god forbid it might restore my faith in men. can't let that happen.
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Old Jul 4, 2003 | 04:49 PM
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Originally posted by 99civic_love
ohhhh

i didn't really read it, god forbid it might restore my faith in men. can't let that happen.
I see how it is. :wtc:
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