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Old 07-03-2003, 09:33 AM
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Your two cents please on this ad. The last one was not approved by Dyson.

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how is it approved for allergy sufferers?
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Ad would be a little larger for the Pet Magazine
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what did dyson have a problem with on the last ad? Did they give you any suggestions?
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It has 5 filters from HEPA to Electrostatic.

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Old 07-03-2003, 09:38 AM
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instead of quick to empty, say easy...it just flows better.

also, I agree that you should clarify how it is advantageous for allergy suffers.
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I had to add a lot of info they use in there ads.

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Old 07-03-2003, 09:39 AM
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Maybe they didn't get the "our vacuums suck" thing? They don't realize that the best vacuums suck hard?
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some of the text gets too close to the product... i think maybe a second shot with a different angle of the product and smaller text might be better? people flip through ads pretty quickly
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Hygienic and quick to empty bin. those two shouldnt be together in the same sentence.

hygienic should be with the approved for allergy sufferers, and instead of quick to empty bin, "easy to empty bin".
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