Almost finished w/ my first song
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Almost finished w/ my first song
It's called
Hot Spits(Triple XXX Rated)
It's soo hot It could melt the sun. I'm gonna try to put the finishing touches on it today record and put it up on the net
here's the end of every verse and the chorus
...
I'm a bad man like hot damn came to spit a hot jam,
never spittin whack cuz if I do I'll have to stop man...
~chorus~
The flows so hot it can't be touched,
so smooth that it can't be rushed,
So good that it's never enough...
it's on a slower 70's ish gangsta beat
Hot Spits(Triple XXX Rated)
It's soo hot It could melt the sun. I'm gonna try to put the finishing touches on it today record and put it up on the net
here's the end of every verse and the chorus
...
I'm a bad man like hot damn came to spit a hot jam,
never spittin whack cuz if I do I'll have to stop man...
~chorus~
The flows so hot it can't be touched,
so smooth that it can't be rushed,
So good that it's never enough...
it's on a slower 70's ish gangsta beat
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/phenom1980music.htm
Hot spitz, peep it, only the first 2 verses a lil ruff but I'll have it put down by tonight
Hot spitz, peep it, only the first 2 verses a lil ruff but I'll have it put down by tonight
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From: Fridley, MN
Not much of a hip-hop/rap fan myself, but it doesn't sound too bad at all. Although, the mix needs some fine tuning and you should maybe ditch the 2 minutes of looped sample with no lyrics at the end of the song.
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Originally posted by Spood
Not much of a hip-hop/rap fan myself, but it doesn't sound too bad at all. Although, the mix needs some fine tuning and you should maybe ditch the 2 minutes of looped sample with no lyrics at the end of the song.
Not much of a hip-hop/rap fan myself, but it doesn't sound too bad at all. Although, the mix needs some fine tuning and you should maybe ditch the 2 minutes of looped sample with no lyrics at the end of the song.
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From: Westside til I die
Sick beat, just need to turn up the vocals a bit.
Tight though!
:thumbup:
Tight though!
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