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Old Jun 9, 2009 | 03:52 PM
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This is what I gots from fiancee and dubby help

To Whom it May Concern;

I am writing to express my interest in the position of Facilities & Event Manager for UCSD. With my experience and excellent capabilities I would appreciate your consideration for this job opening.

My experience in college allowed me to gain a great understanding of theatrical operations from all aspects. Since graduating I was employed by San Diego Opera's Education department where my duties closely resemble your qualifications. Daily tasks included venue inspections, performance deadlines, production/tour calendars, keeping budgets, creating databases of information, problem solving on the road, supervising singers, and many other tasks. Working in the Opera field has allowed me keep a close relationship with music in both the instrumental and vocal disciplines.

I appreciate your taking the time to review my credentials and experience. Thank you for your consideration for this job. I look forward to hearing from you.
Also dubby, it's an online application and I have to put in a desired salary minimum.

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Old Jun 9, 2009 | 03:58 PM
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Originally Posted by Draconius
This is what I gots from fiancee and dubby help



Also dubby, it's an online application and I have to put in a desired salary minimum.
That looks better than my suggestion.

But maybe "working with the Opera" as opposed to "working in the opera".

It's personal preference.. but i like reading the prior better.
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Old Jun 9, 2009 | 04:01 PM
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Originally Posted by Draconius
Also dubby, it's an online application and I have to put in a desired salary minimum.
That's weird...I've never heard of that before. o: That's a tough one.
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Old Jun 9, 2009 | 04:10 PM
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I have a bitchin one that trumps urything man.
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Old Jun 9, 2009 | 04:11 PM
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Originally Posted by CRAIGHIMSELF
I have a bitchin one that trumps urything man.
PM it my way if you can
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Old Jun 9, 2009 | 04:14 PM
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i don't know if you still have it, but i don't like 2 sentences starting with "With my". in stuff like that, i wouldn't have any 2 sentences start the same.
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Old Jun 9, 2009 | 04:19 PM
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application has been sent in. I wanted to get on this quick as it can get swamped with applications. Tomorrow is the deadline for inter-office applications and getting it in with that crew gives better chances, imo.

Thanks to all for your help! And a big thanks to Craiggors.
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Old Jun 9, 2009 | 04:25 PM
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Love,
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Old Jun 10, 2009 | 04:27 AM
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EXPONENTIALLY hard!!!!


no homo.
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