During this new installation order Mr XXX adds a long distance savings plan without the client’s knowledge. The customer and Mrs XXX never talked about long distances yet she proceeds to add the XXX long savings plan. The customer is informed of the total monthly fees but is not aware that it includes a X.XX$ of network charges related to the long distance savings plan nor that he is able to make long distance calls at a reduced rate.

 

huh?

 

you could use some commas in there

 

thanks

 

besides commas, what did you want help with.

 

yeah wtf? i dont see a question

 

i dont know i am guessing there is a better way to put this... English is not my language so i am guessing it could be highly improved.

When you read it do you understand what is going on?

 

i think itd be easier for us to read if it wasnt XXX or Mr. XXX.. replace it with names

 

During this new installation order Mr Pussy adds a long distance savings plan without the client’s knowledge. The customer and Mr Pussy never talked about long distances yet she proceeds to add the Supersaver long distance savings plan. The customer is informed of the total monthly fees but is not aware that it includes a 1000.32$ of network charges related to the long distance savings plan nor that he is able to make long distance calls at a reduced rate.



Better?