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Old Mar 5, 2004 | 12:22 PM
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Took advice to hand, and the sun came out, so I took more pics... what do you think?

still taking advice and comments.

more coming...
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Old Mar 5, 2004 | 12:24 PM
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ok, i've more if needed, but these were the ones I liked
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Old Mar 5, 2004 | 12:24 PM
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I like the bird pictures I'd have zoomed and got a little less sky.
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Old Mar 5, 2004 | 12:25 PM
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i like the 2nd one. theres an obvious subject in it. but i would have moved the glove and placed it in a more open space.

just my $.02
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Old Mar 5, 2004 | 12:27 PM
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Originally Posted by ManInCamo
ok, i've more if needed, but these were the ones I liked
with some cropping, that 4th one is sweet. the bottom half kills the top half of the pic. :happysad: and if the pic would have been exposed like this... https://www.honda-acura.net/forums/a...chmentid=21587

even sweeter :thumbup:
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Old Mar 5, 2004 | 12:33 PM
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Pretty nice, I would have moved the glove as well, the bird one is ok...the 3rd I would of had a bit higher and closer to rail but...thats just my opinion.

They're pretty good mang...
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Old Mar 5, 2004 | 12:35 PM
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I disagree about the glove shot...I think it works exactly like it is.

Those are a very nice improvement and overall I think every one of them looks good.

The bird one....not so sure about a little far off for my taste but its my taste so who cares
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Old Mar 5, 2004 | 12:40 PM
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Originally Posted by Nightshade
I disagree about the glove shot...I think it works exactly like it is.

Those are a very nice improvement and overall I think every one of them looks good.

The bird one....not so sure about a little far off for my taste but its my taste so who cares

same here I like the glove shot. the only thing i would have done differently is maybe take another slightly higher angle shot.
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Old Mar 5, 2004 | 12:42 PM
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btw camo can you not change the name of the pics so i can take a look at the exif info

I would say your aperture setting is probably a little too large. go one step down if you can control it.
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Old Mar 5, 2004 | 12:43 PM
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use more angles like in the second last shot. You have a lot of verticles and horizontles in the composition, but I dont see enough usage of perspective and light - make it move!.

Also, I'd wait till sunup or sun down and really work with the extream contrasts from the sun light.

*ching ching* my two...
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