Looks good...

 

i like it ... although the word dubs should never be used or seen around a civic h:

 

i would think this would go in the basement.

 

 

I think where the red checkers are on the S need to be transparent so you can see the rod go through them. I also think that instead of just the front clip, an outline of the whole car would look nice. At least if they went up as far as the lines. I like the layout though. The idea is :thumbup:
btw, I'm a graphic design major and I know that criticism is more good than bad.

 

Thanks man, I appreciate the ideas....

As for tirod's comment...'Dubs' is short for for "Dubaya" or "Double U" as in "W" which is short for Will...which just happens to be my name...it's been my nickname for a while...and has no relation to what your thinking....

 

Keep the simple two color thing going on, but change the nasty poopy orange color...

 

White + Orange... :yuck:

 

if you want to keep the orange, throw in blue as the contrasting color b/c orange and blue are compliments on the color wheel. makes for good contrast. keep the white in for added contrast.

 

Looks good, except I don't like the piston animation on your title page. Well actually I do like it a lot, if you just tweaked it a bit. The rod is WAAAAAY too long, and the counterweight is too small, and sticking out too far. What can I say, I'm a sucker for details.