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Old Apr 28, 2009 | 03:36 PM
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Originally Posted by Red X
Seems awfully bland.

You need full sentences and clear goals. You want your resume to say 'I'm highly versatile, experienced, and detail oriented' and not 'I have trouble keeping a job, look at all the various crap I've done'; either of which is possible with the resume you posted.
agreed. You need full sentences ryan.

-Cooked food. Turn it into something like "prepare and cook customers food in a timely manner"

Again, just make them all sound jazzy
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