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Old Jan 29, 2008 | 07:38 AM
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Originally Posted by IluvJae
Ruff Draft but what do joo think.....
Looks good, but I think there are too many words. I'd try to keep it simpler. Maybe omitting the word "finest." Also, what is Bad Newz?
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