A couple changes "I" would make. Take them for what they're worth.

Get a professional e-mail address. From the looks of it your resume, it's the only thing not professional about it. Even if you only use if for a couple of months, every little bit could help.

Add a small "Hobbies and Interests" section. Many times interviewers like to talk about your hobbies and see how you might fit in the company with others currently employed there. It also shows them you have a life outside of work.

Good luck!!