I think you should use proper punctuation, so I'm not gasping for air at the end of a sentence. Holy run on sentence Batman, pay attention in English class.
I work with some kid who has a new auto Eclipse with nitrous. He asks me to street race him but I always refuse. I'm patiently waiting for him to blow his tranny or motor. In conclusion, I've never really liked Eclipses. I see more females driving that car then males. That makes it a girly car.