Like Sean said, the intro was a little too long before the vocalist came in. I also agree that more content needs to be put into the lyrics as well. Now, like Sean is with guitars and such, I'm more of a vocalist person. (5+yrs exp)The lead vocalist needs to learn to control his breathing. He was constantly going flat. The thing that he is lacking is that he's not singing from his diaphram, which is essential in utilizing your vocal range. If he can work on that, he'll definitely create a better presence within the music.