to write good college essays, try to show some contradiction, or multiple sides of an arguement. that works for me. like make two sides of a story and write about those two sides. like for 'where am i going', say ' i'm going to college graduate from college if i can put my mind to it' and blah blah blah, then say 'i will not make it if i slack off, which i wont do' blah blah blah.

how long is this supposed to be anyway?