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Old Nov 14, 2003 | 10:51 AM
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assignment: write a technical instructions manual for technical writing class
me an my gf chose mario bros for the nes

http://black_si.tripod.com/draft1.doc

its a rough draft :happysad:
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Old Nov 14, 2003 | 10:56 AM
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This file is hosted by Tripod, a Lycos®Network Site, and is not available for download. Please check out Tripod's Help system for more information about Remote Loading and our Remote Loading policy.

so far... it sucks. h:
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Old Nov 14, 2003 | 11:12 AM
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youll have to type in url
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Old Nov 14, 2003 | 11:14 AM
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1. you suck at numbering... it should be 1. Installation

2. I would number each section on the pages they are on. So where you have Installation, change that to 1. Installation
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Old Nov 14, 2003 | 11:15 AM
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thats pretty dope chucky, me likes :thumbup:
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Old Nov 14, 2003 | 11:26 AM
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Originally posted by axemansean
1. you suck at numbering... it should be 1. Installation

2. I would number each section on the pages they are on. So where you have Installation, change that to 1. Installation
hmm
i was going for page numbers
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Old Nov 14, 2003 | 12:37 PM
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anyone else
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Old Nov 14, 2003 | 01:31 PM
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shellcreepers: hit it once from below.

Aren't you supposed to jump on them, then kick them
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Old Nov 14, 2003 | 01:34 PM
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thats super mario bros
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