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Nov 14, 2003 | 10:51 AM

Grifter

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critique my assignment plz

assignment: write a technical instructions manual for technical writing class
me an my gf chose mario bros for the nes

http://black_si.tripod.com/draft1.doc

its a rough draft :happysad:

Nov 14, 2003 | 10:56 AM

clickwir

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so far... it sucks.

Nov 14, 2003 | 11:12 AM

Grifter

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youll have to type in url

Nov 14, 2003 | 11:14 AM

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1. you suck at numbering... it should be 1. Installation

2. I would number each section on the pages they are on. So where you have Installation, change that to 1. Installation

Nov 14, 2003 | 11:15 AM

puffy

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thats pretty dope chucky, me likes :thumbup:

Nov 14, 2003 | 11:26 AM

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Quote:

Originally posted by axemansean
1. you suck at numbering... it should be 1. Installation

2. I would number each section on the pages they are on. So where you have Installation, change that to 1. Installation

hmm
i was going for page numbers